been following this thread.
it is fun to make these transmitters work!
so
Hawkeye351 did you get this radio to transmit
without the dropping power problem?
and any modulation problem?
here is what I would do.
disable that AMC circuit. keep D92 or R249 cut out.
or adjust the pot so it does not kick in. that part of the
circuit has been messed with.
also remove, as you may have done, that "NPC MOD"
diode, and or diode and resistor.
then adjust for a little bias current on the IRF520's
20 to 50 mA each. measure the input current to the
radio. short out TP3, like this:
got a 939 for repair. it is modified for "TX audio direct injection"
on the back of the radio, and had a "golden screwdriver" turning
this and that.

It worked but ran so hot I was told they had to
put a fan in place of the speaker to keep it cool.

so yes, the "520's" bias was very high. (as usually is the case!)
I started over with my screwdrivers.
first, set it up, AM mode. turn mic gain all the way off (ccw).
use a screwdriver to short out TP3 to the nearby ground.
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this kills the RF going to the mixer.
key up with a current meter...
then set fo 5.5 to 6 volts during high power at the
collector of the modulation transistor, or measure at
the bare wires at where the shorting board goes
on the radios with SSB mode.
then TX and watch your RF output power, and also
monitor the voltage at the modulator output,
making sure it does not drop.
there is DC feedback loop thru R240, TR49 - 50 - 51