yeah, well when it comes to forums as long as theres no typos, and what not. i tend not to go apeshit on everything as-long as im clear and people understand me im happy. and the essay is an academic essay so its 5 paragraphs, 5 sentence essay.
i could have gone on all day about all the critical shit or scientific aspect of it. like i said, my teacher told us to write to our audience, which is her. she doesn't want to see the critical stuff, just hear about interesting things, someone wrote an essay on how to put a kid to bed, others wrote about how to plan a party, i almost went above and beyond with this essay as it is with how technical i got, but anyone could understand what i said, if they want to look into it more then they can do so.
i could have gone on all day about all the critical shit or scientific aspect of it. like i said, my teacher told us to write to our audience, which is her. she doesn't want to see the critical stuff, just hear about interesting things, someone wrote an essay on how to put a kid to bed, others wrote about how to plan a party, i almost went above and beyond with this essay as it is with how technical i got, but anyone could understand what i said, if they want to look into it more then they can do so.
